Rough Cut (without effects)

Obviously, this needs a bit of work/help. I went with an idea from class to switch to an inward zoom for the entire sequence. I also to the liberty to change the order of the locations to some degree. I still need to clean it up (alot) and add film effects on top of each shot to make the quality of the film seem to improve. At this point it seems apparent that I either need to reshoot some locations with a tripod, or purposefully make the locations shot with a tripod purposefully jittery to look more handheld. I clearly need to arrive at a happy medium. Let's not even mention that I still need to find an appropriate soundtrack.